Post by The Great MM on Jun 26, 2012 22:20:41 GMT -5
Name: Ramcheck (AKA: Mr. Clean)
Height: 120 meters
Length: 200 meters
Wingspan: 175 meters
Mass: 43,000 tons
Description: Mr. Clean is a bat-like, serpentine alien. The head is very Bat-like with a crescent-shaped horn resting between the eyes. Think like Showa Ghidorah’s. The neck is shrouded in a thick, perfectly shaped silver mane that also covers the shoulders. The ends of this are braided half-way down instead of just hanging loosely. Sometimes this mane looks a bit more like a braided beard opposed to a mane.
The wings are more like the infamous Manbat (from Batman) in appearance and shape, just a bit more muscular. This allows him to use his arms for both flight and fight.
The body of Ramcheck is much like that of Bagorah, very lean but muscular. The legs are a bit longer, allowing him to stand upright, sort of like this redesign of Bagorah, just MUCH more muscular to go along with the body.
The tail of Mr. Clean is rather lengthy considering his size. It’s very thin, almost rat-like, but ends in a trident, particularly of this design shape.
As for his colors/skins/furs. Being rather obsessed with cleanliness, Mr. Clean’s colors come as no surprise. His primary color is white and shades of gray and some gold. His mane is a silvery color with golden “rope” or hair that wraps around the beads. His wing membrane a pale yellow. The eyes are blue and glow neon blue when angry. The crescent-shaped horn between the eyes/ears is golden. His entire body (including the tail) is covered in bat-like fur that is mostly white, except for a gold section that races down his spine and back of tail. The tail’s trident, which has been surgically attached to his tail in a flawless way (leaving no scars of any sort) is completely golden.
Done by the uber awesome Hayes A Jones!
Attacks:
- Trident of Destiny: Attached to the tip of his tail, Mr. Clean’s legendary weapon has claimed thousands of lives and cleansed hundreds of worlds. Not only is this weapon virtually unbreakable, composed of an unknown metal that is resistant to extreme temperatures (it doesn’t even get hot or cold) and is impossible to stain, but it gives Ramcheck a variety of powers, including…
-- Heavenly Lightning: Three bolts of blue, lightning-like energy launched from the tips. Comparable to Heisei Ghidorah’s gravity bolts. Once hitting an opponent, these bolts will explode and create a burning blue fire (that acts just like his flames of purity) and small amounts of his beautiful mist.
-- Sterilization of Wounds: If stabbed into a victim, the trident will immediately disinfect the wound on an extreme level. At first this may seem ideal for his opponent, but it just doesn’t get rid of outside bacteria and germs, but also those of his victim. This means that it can quickly kill the blood cells, skin cells, etc of his opponent. This process also makes any wounds sting/burn extremely painfully, as if peroxide was poured directly into the wound.
-- Whips of Punishment: The three tips of the trident can unleash blue, Legion-like whips of energy capable of cutting into the flesh and armor of his opponents (or wrapping around limbs). However, unlike Legion’s, Mr. Clean has completely control of these three whips and can use them with a flick of his lengthy tail. These three whips are one of Mr. Clean’s most used attacks.
- Bleach Bite: When biting an opponent (generally he goes for the neck, but any part will do), Ramcheck can inject a dangerous, bleach-like chemical into the wound. Like normal bleach, this is extremely hazardous and can cause great pain to his victims. His saliva is what causes this for it is filled with this specific chemical.
- Divine Judgement: The crescent-shaped horn on his head will begin to glow blue and release dozens of missile-strength, energy blasts. Think M.O.G.U.E.R.A.'s optic blasts but colored blue and a bit smaller. Once striking a target, these blasts will explode and create a burning blue fire (that acts just like his flames of purity) and small amounts of his beautiful mist.
- Beautiful Mist: From his chest, Mr. Clean can release a cloud of white mist. This mist has a very powerful, anti-bacterial property to it and bleaching effect. If an opponent breathes this mist in (or gets it in the eyes or open wounds), the effects can be extremely painful for it instantly kills exposed blood cells and bacteria. This can make eyes dry up and burn, mouths rapidly dry, and wounds become extremely painful. It can also irritate the flesh of his opponents and cause adverse affects on his surroundings, especially to plant life and painted structures.
- Flames of Purity: Standard flamethrower-like attack fired from his jaws. These flames burn blue. However, unlike normal flames, these blue flames have an ability to virtually suck the oxygen out of an opponent’s body, rapidly drying out the body while also burning them alive.
- Radiant Flash: Mr. Clean’s body will begin to rapidly glow a beautiful golden before releasing a tremendous amount of light, temporarily blinding his opponents.
- Cleansed Perfection: Used when an opponent is either trapped or fallen for a short period, Ramcheck will fly into the air, generally 700-meters above the target. His trident will begin to glow blue as he flies in a circle, creating a perfect circle of energy. This energy will then form a lens. From the center of the lens, a brilliant beam of blue light and speckles will then fell directly onto the target. This energy is highly anti-bacterial and can wreck havoc on an opponent’s body. The flesh that gets struck directly will have all the bacteria and germs within it instantly killed and water dried up, leaving the flesh dried and burning. What follows this is a secondary blast of light, much more explosive, that rips into the opponent’s body and cleanses it, killing most of the bacteria in the body and removing a large portion of the water. This leaves the victim not only ripped open, but the blood will find it difficult to transport oxygen to the brain or unable to properly digest (thanks to the killing of bacteria). Finally, a large explosion (think Heisei Godzilla’s spiral beam) of blue fire (acting just like his flames of purity) and his beautiful mist will engulf the fallen opponent. Limited two uses per match.
- Suds & Bloods: Mr. Clean's blue blood is extremely thick and soapy, forming bubbles and suds when exposed to open air. Opponents that get a taste of the blood will find it extremely distasteful, much like getting a mouthful of it. This can kill the bacteria in one's mouth and stomach while burning the esophagus. If his soapy blood touches an open wound, it can dissinfect it and kill bacteria around it, causing intense stinging (think peroxide).
Powers:
- Tail: Mr. Clean’s tail is extremely long and flexible. It can be used to batter opponents or coil around them. When in combat, the tail is known to shoot around his body (or over his head) and stab a victim with the trident tipping it.
- Radar & Hearing: Being bat-like, it comes as no surprise that he has an enhanced hearing ability, able to detect sounds well above that of what normal monsters can hear and also making it difficult to sneak up him. He also has an organic radar, allowing him to keep track of multiple opponents, even if a few aren’t moving, and make flawless mental maps of his environment.
- Biological Perfection: Ramcheck is “biologically perfect”, meaning his body has one of the best immune systems there is. Poisons can still affect him, but the effects will be extremely limited and rapidly taken out. On a human scale, this would be like getting a severe case of bronchitis, but having such a good immune system that it seems more like the common cold. His soapy blood also combats foreign disease that some kaiju carry and can help protect his body from attacks that cause necrosis (the rapid dying and decomposing of flesh).
- Flight at Mach 4.5.
Weakness: None
Note: I may or may not be adding more attacks and such in the future. This is a character that is very fresh (having only been dreamed up a few months ago). He could change in personality, attacks, and everything. I’ll use this as a “recording” to show you how some of my kaiju advance in originality and creation.
Height: 120 meters
Length: 200 meters
Wingspan: 175 meters
Mass: 43,000 tons
Description: Mr. Clean is a bat-like, serpentine alien. The head is very Bat-like with a crescent-shaped horn resting between the eyes. Think like Showa Ghidorah’s. The neck is shrouded in a thick, perfectly shaped silver mane that also covers the shoulders. The ends of this are braided half-way down instead of just hanging loosely. Sometimes this mane looks a bit more like a braided beard opposed to a mane.
The wings are more like the infamous Manbat (from Batman) in appearance and shape, just a bit more muscular. This allows him to use his arms for both flight and fight.
The body of Ramcheck is much like that of Bagorah, very lean but muscular. The legs are a bit longer, allowing him to stand upright, sort of like this redesign of Bagorah, just MUCH more muscular to go along with the body.
The tail of Mr. Clean is rather lengthy considering his size. It’s very thin, almost rat-like, but ends in a trident, particularly of this design shape.
As for his colors/skins/furs. Being rather obsessed with cleanliness, Mr. Clean’s colors come as no surprise. His primary color is white and shades of gray and some gold. His mane is a silvery color with golden “rope” or hair that wraps around the beads. His wing membrane a pale yellow. The eyes are blue and glow neon blue when angry. The crescent-shaped horn between the eyes/ears is golden. His entire body (including the tail) is covered in bat-like fur that is mostly white, except for a gold section that races down his spine and back of tail. The tail’s trident, which has been surgically attached to his tail in a flawless way (leaving no scars of any sort) is completely golden.
Done by the uber awesome Hayes A Jones!
Attacks:
- Trident of Destiny: Attached to the tip of his tail, Mr. Clean’s legendary weapon has claimed thousands of lives and cleansed hundreds of worlds. Not only is this weapon virtually unbreakable, composed of an unknown metal that is resistant to extreme temperatures (it doesn’t even get hot or cold) and is impossible to stain, but it gives Ramcheck a variety of powers, including…
-- Heavenly Lightning: Three bolts of blue, lightning-like energy launched from the tips. Comparable to Heisei Ghidorah’s gravity bolts. Once hitting an opponent, these bolts will explode and create a burning blue fire (that acts just like his flames of purity) and small amounts of his beautiful mist.
-- Sterilization of Wounds: If stabbed into a victim, the trident will immediately disinfect the wound on an extreme level. At first this may seem ideal for his opponent, but it just doesn’t get rid of outside bacteria and germs, but also those of his victim. This means that it can quickly kill the blood cells, skin cells, etc of his opponent. This process also makes any wounds sting/burn extremely painfully, as if peroxide was poured directly into the wound.
-- Whips of Punishment: The three tips of the trident can unleash blue, Legion-like whips of energy capable of cutting into the flesh and armor of his opponents (or wrapping around limbs). However, unlike Legion’s, Mr. Clean has completely control of these three whips and can use them with a flick of his lengthy tail. These three whips are one of Mr. Clean’s most used attacks.
- Bleach Bite: When biting an opponent (generally he goes for the neck, but any part will do), Ramcheck can inject a dangerous, bleach-like chemical into the wound. Like normal bleach, this is extremely hazardous and can cause great pain to his victims. His saliva is what causes this for it is filled with this specific chemical.
- Divine Judgement: The crescent-shaped horn on his head will begin to glow blue and release dozens of missile-strength, energy blasts. Think M.O.G.U.E.R.A.'s optic blasts but colored blue and a bit smaller. Once striking a target, these blasts will explode and create a burning blue fire (that acts just like his flames of purity) and small amounts of his beautiful mist.
- Beautiful Mist: From his chest, Mr. Clean can release a cloud of white mist. This mist has a very powerful, anti-bacterial property to it and bleaching effect. If an opponent breathes this mist in (or gets it in the eyes or open wounds), the effects can be extremely painful for it instantly kills exposed blood cells and bacteria. This can make eyes dry up and burn, mouths rapidly dry, and wounds become extremely painful. It can also irritate the flesh of his opponents and cause adverse affects on his surroundings, especially to plant life and painted structures.
- Flames of Purity: Standard flamethrower-like attack fired from his jaws. These flames burn blue. However, unlike normal flames, these blue flames have an ability to virtually suck the oxygen out of an opponent’s body, rapidly drying out the body while also burning them alive.
- Radiant Flash: Mr. Clean’s body will begin to rapidly glow a beautiful golden before releasing a tremendous amount of light, temporarily blinding his opponents.
- Cleansed Perfection: Used when an opponent is either trapped or fallen for a short period, Ramcheck will fly into the air, generally 700-meters above the target. His trident will begin to glow blue as he flies in a circle, creating a perfect circle of energy. This energy will then form a lens. From the center of the lens, a brilliant beam of blue light and speckles will then fell directly onto the target. This energy is highly anti-bacterial and can wreck havoc on an opponent’s body. The flesh that gets struck directly will have all the bacteria and germs within it instantly killed and water dried up, leaving the flesh dried and burning. What follows this is a secondary blast of light, much more explosive, that rips into the opponent’s body and cleanses it, killing most of the bacteria in the body and removing a large portion of the water. This leaves the victim not only ripped open, but the blood will find it difficult to transport oxygen to the brain or unable to properly digest (thanks to the killing of bacteria). Finally, a large explosion (think Heisei Godzilla’s spiral beam) of blue fire (acting just like his flames of purity) and his beautiful mist will engulf the fallen opponent. Limited two uses per match.
- Suds & Bloods: Mr. Clean's blue blood is extremely thick and soapy, forming bubbles and suds when exposed to open air. Opponents that get a taste of the blood will find it extremely distasteful, much like getting a mouthful of it. This can kill the bacteria in one's mouth and stomach while burning the esophagus. If his soapy blood touches an open wound, it can dissinfect it and kill bacteria around it, causing intense stinging (think peroxide).
Powers:
- Tail: Mr. Clean’s tail is extremely long and flexible. It can be used to batter opponents or coil around them. When in combat, the tail is known to shoot around his body (or over his head) and stab a victim with the trident tipping it.
- Radar & Hearing: Being bat-like, it comes as no surprise that he has an enhanced hearing ability, able to detect sounds well above that of what normal monsters can hear and also making it difficult to sneak up him. He also has an organic radar, allowing him to keep track of multiple opponents, even if a few aren’t moving, and make flawless mental maps of his environment.
- Biological Perfection: Ramcheck is “biologically perfect”, meaning his body has one of the best immune systems there is. Poisons can still affect him, but the effects will be extremely limited and rapidly taken out. On a human scale, this would be like getting a severe case of bronchitis, but having such a good immune system that it seems more like the common cold. His soapy blood also combats foreign disease that some kaiju carry and can help protect his body from attacks that cause necrosis (the rapid dying and decomposing of flesh).
- Flight at Mach 4.5.
Weakness: None
Note: I may or may not be adding more attacks and such in the future. This is a character that is very fresh (having only been dreamed up a few months ago). He could change in personality, attacks, and everything. I’ll use this as a “recording” to show you how some of my kaiju advance in originality and creation.