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Post by alienhulk2099 on Dec 9, 2012 23:17:08 GMT -5
Tel Megiddo by Danzilla ucarena.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=approved&action=display&thread=842going against my creation of Dr. Silver ucarena.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=approved&action=display&thread=1059Ref: Giratina Arena: A dark marshland at night, heavy fog to reduce visibility and deep waters make land based manuvering and running difficult. Intro: It was night out in the old marshlands, predators all abound with prey being nabbed from every other direction. A place seemingly more timeline than even time itself. Dr. Silver was forced to go here under military orders to fight some monster sighted in the area. The Doc complained 'Why am I here? Why can't they get someone else to do this trash? I'd pick my nose at them if I had a nose left!...... Or even a face!' Suddenly the doctor heard something in the deep swamp, hearing a potential opponent rise out from the abyss of the night sky as he commented 'Oh hell naw, here we go! Yatte Yaruze!' |
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Post by Tenshi the Sunkern on Dec 9, 2012 23:19:34 GMT -5
.... And now we wait for our intro from Dan before letting this fight begin.
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Post by GI Jho on Dec 9, 2012 23:30:34 GMT -5
OOC: Next time ask what arena we're fighting in before you set it up, okay?
A thin ray of light sliced down over the relatively quiet marshlands. The thin, gnarled branches of the trees swayed in a weak breeze that circled the entire arena. The stillness was eerie. as the good doctor awaited his challengers' arrival, he couldn't help but be curious as to what he would be challenging. Was it a machine, some alien lenace from beyond the fleshy form? Was it a beast, a savage monster hellbent on his desturction? An abomination, somethnig beyond comprehension, sent down to battle him one on one in this hideous, yet tranquil land?
Soon, the ray of light died down, as soon, the hunched over form of a cybernetic creature emerged. The creature was silent, almost ghostly silent, as it soon reared up to its full (unimpressive) height. Leanign on a massive blade, easily as tall and wide as the creature, the horror soon locked his empty eyes on his opponent, a low hiss exitting from his armored mask. The creature then began to let out a soft, yet terrifying chuckle, before the beast croaked out in a hoarse, almost choknig, voice at his foe.
"DIE... SLOWLY...." Tel croaked, before he let out a long, haunting moan, and adopted a fighting stance. It was time to kill!
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Post by Tenshi the Sunkern on Dec 9, 2012 23:33:32 GMT -5
(OOC: Posting order is in order the intros were posted, AH, so you go first, then Dan, then you again.)
A great and powerful voice boomed out over the swampy land, causing the waters to tremble and the land to shake. "MONSTERS... FIGHT!"
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Post by alienhulk2099 on Dec 10, 2012 19:59:33 GMT -5
Dr. Silver yelled 'Slowly? Fool, I'm powered by Roadrunner! NEEP NEEP!' and started the battle by swinging the Cobra Whip incredibly rapidly above over his head to build momentum. After several seconds of building momentum the serpent weapon was aimed at where the doc had heard his opponent's voice in the dark and foggy marshlands. Cobra Whip had a successful strong hit right into Tel's throat. The weapon retracted as Dr. Silver managed to find some shallow water that allowed him to jump into the air and proceeded to execute a flying punch at Tel.
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Post by GI Jho on Dec 10, 2012 21:18:43 GMT -5
As the flying punch came in to strike the form of the psychopath, a powerful force overcame Dr. Silver's body. The good doctor struggled and shook, attempting to free himself, but the force still gripped him, almost like an invisible boa constrictor. Suddenly, the force squeezed horrifically tight, nearly crushing him into a gooey pulp, before he was suddenly slammed brutally into the marshy ground in an eruption of dirt and muck. The doctor rose to his feet, cleaning himself off, as he scanned the swamps for his foe.
The cretin soon showed his cruel visage.
With an audible groan, Tel came bearing down on him, the massive, rusted sword cleaving into Doctor Silver's body. The blade sunk in deep into his strange, liquidy skin, chunks of his body being ripped violently away from the torso upon impact. As tel brought his fist forward to punch the strange being in the face, Doctor Silver delivered a vicious kick in Tel's chest, forcing the psychopath backwards and violently wrenching the blade free from the giant man's body with a sickening SWIK.
Tel let out a low groan, before Dr. Silver was suddenly struck with another invisible force, this time, striking him straight in the chest. His liquidy form was somewhat less resilient than actual flesh, meaning the powerful blow created a massive indentation upon impact, and sent the small creature flying backwards from the blow. The being soon skidded across the ground, creating massive ruts in the mud. As the doctor looked back up, Tel's left arm had warped into its plasma cannon form, before a flurry of plasma bolts fired out at the prone warrior...
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Post by alienhulk2099 on Dec 11, 2012 17:03:01 GMT -5
Dr. Silver quickly rolled out of the way of the hellish attack, rolling into the mud and the deep swamp. Tel attempted to find his enemy but to no avail as he was hard to locate. Within a minute of the search, the Cobra Whip was launched directly behind it's target's right knee, knocking him down long enough for Dr. Silver to sweep kick the beast. As the doctor got up and Tel was knocked down he twirled his weapon across the air before sayhing 'Hammer Time!' and thrust it toward the ground on his opponent with tremendous force.
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Post by Tenshi the Sunkern on Dec 11, 2012 17:13:41 GMT -5
"ATTENTION! UNFAIR COMBAT BEHAVIOR BY COMBATANT: DOCTOR SILVER!"
The sound of the booming voice caught the good doctor by surprise, haulting the hammer. A thin line appeared on the horizon, a brief flash at that... which was immediately followed by a whining sound, and a giant blue beam slamming into the doctor from the side, blasting a chunk of his hide out and sending him toppling head over heels in the marsh before skidding to a stop, the doctor now facedown in the muck, his mind reeling from the hit...
(OOC: Alright, a few things, AH. I know your new here, and probably didn't read the rules very closely, but in the future, keep these tips in mind. 1. Always let the opponent land a hit on you during your post. You did this in the first post and you did it now. 2. A little more beef ans detail in your posts would be nice, and more appealing to the professional eye. Also, you can unleash up to 3 landing attacks and an uncertain 4th attack at the end. And 3. Do not try and reedit your past posts unless it's for grammatical errors. what is done is done, and you can't fix it. Jus tmove on and observe your foe. This is only going to count as a single strike against you, but from here on out, I won't be as lenient. and there are Mods and Admins here far less forgiving than me, so you better start improving ASAP.)
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Post by alienhulk2099 on Dec 11, 2012 17:46:56 GMT -5
I was not aware of #1 and I thought it was only three attacks allowed for #2. As for #3 that is all I did.
The doctor got up with a massive head injury figuring out what just happened.
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Post by GI Jho on Dec 15, 2012 10:22:40 GMT -5
The massive weapon slammed down on Tel's broken form, the rusty armor on the hideous abomination cracking and splintering upon impact of the good doctor's primary melee weapon. Tel made no signs of pain from the impact; jsut a slight grunt of aknowledgement of the brutal blow. Dr. Sivler was unnerved by the horror's show of resilience. How could it have barely reacted to such a blow? Its armor splintered and caved in upon impact, and this... this THING merely aknowledged it with a passive grunt! Dr. Silver prepared to wind up his cobra whip for another brutal blow, but Tel soon stumbled cumsily up to his feet, using his gargantuan blade as a cane. Now, the fun would begin.
Dr. Silver whipped his deadly tool around, aiming to strike Tel full force with it, but the telekinetic psychopath was having none of that. A brutal force once more gripped Dr. Silver, befoe a pressure, one that was beyond anything a mere beast could create, even using a tonnage massing over 400,000 tons, as Tel squeezed his foe like a ripe grape waitign to burst. Dr. Silver's form was violently compressed, the leggs contorting so far as to touch the back of his head. His arms were twisted into an unnatural position- so much so that his arms were nearly unrecognizable due to intense contortion.Silver's head faired the worst- his liquid-metal cranium was lacking the resilience of a normal cranium, which made it all too easy for Tel the squish it into an uncomfortable position and attempt to pop his head into a cloud of silver goop.
As the telekinetic force hamstrung the hapless and helpless Dr. Silver, Tel warped his hand once more into its plasma gun form. But this time, he had a special surprise for his intended target. Tel's ranged weapon began to glow brightly, and the immobile doctor saw what the monster was planning. Sivler struggled and struggled with all of his surprising strength, but it was not enough for him to break free from the telekinetic force of Tel Megiddo. Suddenloy, a single, blusih white orb flew out of the tip of the gun, and struck Dr. Silver. The orb was hot and adhesive, and suddenly, became almost unbearably hot. Dr. Sivler let out a cry, as his entire form was engulfed in a massive, plasma heated explosion!
Tel relinquished his telekinesis, just to watch the smaller monster fly through the air like a ragdoll, before disappearing into the murky waters below, the area he landed in steaming form the heat of the explosion. Tel let out a haunting chuckle, before breaking out into a full-fledged laughing fit, his hellish squeals of joy stretching across the marshlands, and hanging in the air like the moan of a spectre. Tel soon approached the spot where Dr. Silver was, and, using his telekinesis, lifted him out of the water (showing the massive hole blown out of his torso, and the bubbling form of the rest of his body), before he delivered another telekinetic blast straight to his chest, sending him flying backwards into the water. Satisfied with himself, Tel decided to pull up a massive wave of mud, sticks, and stones, aiming to crush and/ or drown Dr. Silver beneath the murky waves....
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Post by alienhulk2099 on Dec 15, 2012 19:38:31 GMT -5
Dr. Silver's body laid still and near death by the force of Tel's telekinetic powers.
Sorry danzilla, you're too good for a noob like me and I cannot write four paragraphs. You win, I forfeit and lose, and I need to take more notes on these matches in the future.
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Post by GI Jho on Dec 15, 2012 21:53:35 GMT -5
(( OOC: Awww, c'mon, dude. Don't jsut go belly up. The only way to learn is to practice. I'm not gonna stop you if you wanna withdraw, but I'd prefer you don't.))
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Post by alienhulk2099 on Dec 15, 2012 23:20:39 GMT -5
I'm a noob anyway.  Sorry DZ, perhaps next time; I will be sure to take some notes on this for the future! |
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Post by Tenshi the Sunkern on Dec 16, 2012 0:25:25 GMT -5
"ATTENTION FIGHTERS! TEL IS THE WINNER OF THIS MATCH! I REPEAT, TEL IS THE VICTOR OF THIS MATCH! PLEASE RETURN TO YOUR HEALING TANKS AT ONCE!"
OOC: Sorry AH... the long posts and quality can take a little getting used to... be sure to read and observe othe rpeople's fights to get an idea as to what to do next time...
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Sorry DZ, perhaps next time; I will be sure to take some notes on this for the future!